Thursday, 15 January 2009

The Parting

Here's a poem that I've just made - just to stimulate the curiosities of my friends.

*Laughs evilly*


The Parting


On the day - the time we both first met,
I thought we'd last for long,
Thought that things were readily set,
But now it's naught but song.

Through toil and strife we tried to last,
And clashes we've endured,
But wings could break in just a gust,
So I wasn't quite assured.

I longed for others, I dreamt of them,
You were silent all those years,
Bringing the person I solely am,
To the verge of hollow tears.

One perfect day you ended it,
Breaking off from me,
Leaving me speechless in my seat,
Oh, that was misery.

Chanceless again to be at your side,
No more "you and me",
For in pure freedom you now reside,
Here's my apology.


And people would start asking - "Who's the 'you'?"

No one guessed it right.
Not even close.

No one had any idea of what I wrote, XD.

Interpret it in your own way, and have fun. Let the poem remain a mystery except to me myself, :P.

7 comments:

arct said...

i think i know what is you.

Anonymous said...

my guess is hym...m i rite?

Anonymous said...

my guess is ckm.

Spiral Riynn said...

Very good^^ Though I have no idea who that 'you' is...

jiawei lim said...

hei,i just read your poem ,i think it is quite nice and touching.hehe , inever write a poem before

Anonymous said...

If im not wrong. that "you" is the she who loves cat, rite?(or izzit me??XD)

Btw, nice poem, juz cant imagine how u write it out..(coz I cant)

keep on writing..

Punk Chopsticks said...

blasting poem...the 'you' doesn't really matter does it?